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[Wednesday the 6th ] [ mood | Encouraged ] fromChuck Venegoni <chuck.venegoni@d214.org> toLisa <radiotique@gmail.com> dateWed, May 6, 2009 at 7:23 PM subjectRe: mailed-byd214.org hide details 7:23 PM (2 hours ago) Reply   Lisa, Very fine work.  I'm impressed by the structure: economical and thorough. You make good use of the poem's internal structure in organizing your essay.  The intro is effective and well cued.  The overview P includes a thesis that you do follow in your two P body.  I also note that you've used abundant citation, regularly tying it to the thesis.  Excellent job. If you write like this tomorrow you'll ace the Q. On another note, your reading shows a real talent for a deep understanding and appreciation of poetry.  Keep that gift controlled and focused, and you'll do very well-- I'm confident.  And, it won't hurt to keep a eye on the tight and purposeful form you used in the paper.  Use what you obviously know. Good luck-- great analysis of the poem. 2 comments|post comment

[Sunday the 19th ] Fitter, happier, more productive, Comfortable, Regular exercise at the gym (3 days a week), Getting on better with your associate employee contemporaries , At ease, Eating well (no more microwave dinners and saturated fats), A patient better driver, A safer car Sleeping well (no bad dreams), No paranoia, Careful to all animals (never washing spiders down the plughole), Keep in contact with old friends Will frequently check credit at (moral) bank (hole in the wall), Favors for favors, Fond but not in love, Charity standing orders, on Sundays ring road supermarket (no killing moths or putting boiling water on the ants), Car wash (also on Sundays), No longer afraid of the dark or midday shadows Nothing so ridiculously teenage and desperate, Nothing so childish - at a better pace, Slower and more calculated, No chance of escape, Now self-employed, Concerned (but powerless), An empowered and informed member of society (pragmatism not idealism), Will not cry in public, Less chance of illness, Tires that grip in the wet A good memory, Still cries at a good film, Still kisses with saliva, No longer empty and frantic like a cat tied to a stick, (the ability to laugh at weakness), Calm, Fitter, Healthier and more productive A pig in a cage on antibiotics. post comment

One Week Until Ultimate Contentment [Wednesday the 11th ] i love my grandmother. More than almost everyone, really. Which is why everything was alright for a while when her letter came for me in the mail this afternoon. My dearest Lisa, Just wanted to tell you that I am soo happy that you want to come out to visit me. We all look forward to your stay with us - play cards, go shopping, just talk and walk the dog together.   The weather is guaranteed to be mild, you know that. I hope that you can teach me about the computer a few useful things.   I hope that you will have a very good flight.   Hasta la vista! Grandma Just one more week. i have to hold on just one more week, and i will get some rest. 2 comments|post comment

[Tuesday the 24th ]  This holds true;  We accept the love we think we deserve. 2 comments|post comment

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